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1 My Kirby and MLP crossover on Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:35 pm

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2 Re: My Kirby and MLP crossover on Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:37 pm

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I really liked First Chapter. Very Happy

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3 Re: My Kirby and MLP crossover on Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:44 pm

IceShadow1199 wrote:I really liked First Chapter. Very Happy

Thanks! I think I did better writing that then I did the second. Was the Trollestia reference funny?

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4 Re: My Kirby and MLP crossover on Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:58 pm

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I liked the Second One too!

"Your sister is a jerk" "Like mine"

"Bun! SHUT UP"

Best part ever.

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5 Re: My Kirby and MLP crossover on Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:06 pm

IceShadow1199 wrote:I liked the Second One too!

"Your sister is a jerk" "Like mine"

"Bun! SHUT UP"

Best part ever.

XD Yeah, that part. Definatly sounds like something Bun would say, doesn't it? I think I may introduce Kine in the next chapter. Have any other ideas?

EDIT: Gah! I just noticed some typos while re-readin the whole thing.

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6 Re: My Kirby and MLP crossover on Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:34 pm

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I saw the typos too, but I don't mind! Everyone makes typos sometimes! Laughing

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7 Re: My Kirby and MLP crossover on Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:52 pm

IceShadow1199 wrote:I saw the typos too, but I don't mind! Everyone makes typos sometimes! Laughing

True, I never read through it before I posted to check anyway. I went through and fixed them. I can't think of anything to have happen in the next chapter. I'm stuck.

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